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DREAM WOMEN | Black Pill | Grey Pill

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Published on 24 Jan 2023 / In People & Blogs

Is all that's left for a men in the west the dream of a long term relationship with a Woman #men #blackpill #dating

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Life_N_Times_of_Shane_T_Hanson

This is a lot better - it sounds like your working from a written and prepared script with bullet points.

A) then B) then C) etc... and only going backwards to tie in a specific subject that say B) was a lead in for F) , but not repeating the points over and over and over...

A huge improvement.

Good Job.

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Hold The Truth Hostage

IThanks for the feedback but I never have a script, its just that new people show up in the comment section so I repeat or I have a new perspective i what I said before, remember its interactive

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Life_N_Times_of_Shane_T_Hanson

@Hold The Truth Hostage: Yeah - some repetition is valid... when I first heard your broadcasts a couple of years back (???) they were actually quite shit and there was a lot of rambling and repetition and I thought you were a drug fucked stoner... gone in the head and just talking shit - it really was that bad. But things have improved a lot. You see I don't have the attention span for 5 minutes of content dragged out into 30 minutes of talking... So I don't handle people very well who take ages to get to the point and don't make it clearly.... So you have progressed from talking all over the place and taking hours to do it - into making a credible broadcast... Getting to the point and going from point to point. Go back to one of your broadcasts a year or two back, and compare it to the one you made just the other day on black pills... It's a huge improvement.

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Life_N_Times_of_Shane_T_Hanson

Maybe if was only a few different episodes over a certain span of time.... Most are fairly good.

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Hold The Truth Hostage

@Life_N_Times_of_Shane_T_Hanson: I respect the feedback respect man

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