DREAM WOMEN | Black Pill | Grey Pill
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This is a lot better - it sounds like your working from a written and prepared script with bullet points.
A) then B) then C) etc... and only going backwards to tie in a specific subject that say B) was a lead in for F) , but not repeating the points over and over and over...
A huge improvement.
Good Job.