Growing Up in MGTOW
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Published on 29 Jan 2024 / In
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You see - I had had 3 or 4 hours sleep, woke up at 4 am - ish - had to go pick up some medical supplies from a fair distance away, and to do it before it got hot.... IF I could.
AND I have a habit of getting into endless repetition and this was an unscripted chat on the road.
It could have been really improved by using it as the template and writing up a written script, with:
1. Point by point bulletins.
2. Adding a scripted narrative to each bulletin.
3. Rehearsing it once or twice, with live recordings, and then:
i) Making additions and subtractions - with concise editing, and
4. Then going with the polished enough, final version.
Infinite repetitions is a BAD thing for spoken communication.
They MUST be worked on, and rehearsed and scripted out of existence.